Friday, July 2, 2021

My Writing

so for our class, we have 4m writing about something so I did the diving one and I think I did a very good job on it is very good to me it is very fun to read well I think so. 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora. I am James from St Mary’s School.
    I enjoyed your description.
    The start gave me a memory of when my family nearly forgot me.
    It was very interesting when you told me about the sunken pirate ship.
    Please visit my blog.
    here

    Mā te wā
    James

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