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Friday, July 2, 2021
My Writing
so for our class, we have 4m writing about something so I did the diving one and I think I did a very good job on it is very good to me it is very fun to read well I think so.
Kia ora. I am James from St Mary’s School. I enjoyed your description. The start gave me a memory of when my family nearly forgot me. It was very interesting when you told me about the sunken pirate ship. Please visit my blog. here
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Kia ora. I am James from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your description.
The start gave me a memory of when my family nearly forgot me.
It was very interesting when you told me about the sunken pirate ship.
Please visit my blog.
here
Mā te wā
James